Monday, March 7, 2011

the 2nd COURAGEOUS entry




paloma paloma! says:



breaking up with exes is something like
float drowning into deep waters;
the more you struggle the less likely
you'll float.

surrender is key

next thing you know
you awake with eyes transfixed into the azure.
looking up
wondering how you got there
floating effortlessly as every atom of you is graceful
heart throbbing at a normal pace
breathing once again

2 comments:

ODILE MONOD said...

nice how nice...
THE COURAGE TO SURRENDER... there's a song that popped into my head... i think it goes SURRENDAH SURRENDAH.. (dammit those musical notes won't go in this comment box...) ♪♪♪♪♪

ODILE MONOD said...

oh there! ♪♪♪♪♪